Wow, wow, wow, what do we have here? Talented author's amazing book. Well, the first chapter itself was enough to intrigue me. Well-written plot and characters. Grandpa is serious trouble. I wonder how Ayla and Claude's relationship will develop. Best of luck author!
2021-07-14 02:34:48
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usha412
Loved this story. Not a cliched one I can say, so I want to read more and find out how she became "heartless". Although I might have some inkling about it. Anyway, good luck, dear Author. Definitely recommended.
2021-05-19 03:50:24
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Cruchymonster
I mean guys, It's pretty good. Only 5 chapters but it has the potential to win the competition a big shot. The writing is good and so try it out
2021-05-18 19:59:52
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Aysel Inara
The talented author of "My little sunshine" and "the return of the beguiling beauty" has finally barged here! (Take my bow, sire!)
You can blindly trust her on romantic emphasis and emotional development of the characters. Well, of course snu snu/smut is included. It's been 5 chaps and I see talent
2021-05-17 03:40:01
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Ren_
Good novel. Unlike any cliche romance romance novels, it fits right. Good pacing, writing, and lively characters, which expected from the dumdum if you know the author. Her novels filled with subtle clues foreshadowing plot twists. Beware of them. Thanks for another yet good novel.
2021-05-16 13:23:35
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Mark D Dragneel
This novel is seriously more than just interesting I can't stop reading it.. No grammar or whatever mistakes, nice flow of the story...
2021-05-16 00:39:41
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Chaos Prime
This novel is so good. Such a poor girl Ayla is. I thought the father was bad enough but the old guy is a big A**hole Ba*tard!
2021-05-16 00:39:31
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Chaos Prime
This novel is so good. Such a poor girl Ayla is. I thought the father was bad enough but the old guy is a big A**hole Ba*tard!
2021-05-16 00:39:30
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Mystique
This is a roller coaster! I thought the father will be mean, but the grandfather is the real meanie! I am excited to know how Ayla handles this. This is a great book which is being well written by our dear author. This book will reach great heights, good luck dumdum.
2021-05-15 23:36:08
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dumdum007
I hope you guys enjoy reading about Ayla and Claude, and their journey together. Have fun!