Hi lovely readers! This is a response to a comment I found really interesting. I believe the concern of this reader was “issues” and hoping they aren’t major. First, I learnt quite a lot from writing Kian’s and Leslie book and I have plotted Travis’ book to make sure I don’t repeat my mistakes. However, what you refer to as issues is what writers generally refer to as “conflict” Every book needs one, whether major or minor. Whether internal or external. It’s an important driving force in books big or small. Therefore, there will be conflict. It is only going to be handled in a way that will keep the plot intact and not drag the story on endlessly. Unless you want Travis to sleep with Sophie ones and immediately realize he doesn’t want an arranged marriage anymore.😅 Let me know your thoughts!
BOOK 3: CHAPTER 58 -ELAINE- I never enjoyed those big gatherings. There were too many lights, too many people, and too much noise. My jacket always felt uncomfortable, and my tie squeezed my neck. I always wanted to leave, but somehow, I could never bring myself to do it. I went because it was
BOOK 3: CHAPTER 57 -ELAINE- It was becoming increasingly difficult to hold back the smile that crept onto my face whenever I looked at Duncan. We were stepping into something new together, something genuine and tender, with an undeniable spark that felt both exhilarating and a bit overwhelming.
BOOK 3: CHAPTER 56 -ELAINE- I nodded my head, unable to talk but still I needed him to know that I'm a virgin. “ I have never done this before,” I said to him, almost feeling embarrassed. He lifted my head and I could feel the sincerity in his eyes. “ We.. don't.. have.. to.. I will.. wait.. for
BOOK 3: CHAPTER 55 -ELAINE- By the time we pulled into my driveway, the night had transformed into something soft and each moment stretching out like gold thread. Duncan switched off the engine, and for a heartbeat, we sat in silence, comfortable and satiated from dinner. I caught his gaze in
BOOK 3: CHAPTER 54 -ELAINE- I clocked out early from work and prepared for my date with meticulous care. I chose the red dress that previously garnered attention at that party hosted by Duncan for the kids. I made the conscious choice to wear it again, this time for him. The hue always carried a
BOOK 3:CHAPTER 53 -ELAINE- The evening had set in, and it was time for my departure from Duncan’s home. The reason I was rushing home was that Duncan had made a promise to visit my house later. “Don’t leave us, you can stay the night just like you did previously, Elaine,” Amelia insisted, her per