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When Hope is Tested

Author: Mira Elion
last update Last Updated: 2026-01-16 00:38:08

Morning arrived like it always did, unapologetic and bright.

Sunlight crept through the narrow windows of Alina’s chamber, spilling across the stone floor and climbing the walls inch by inch. Somewhere in the palace, bells rang for the first hour. Servants moved about their duties. Doors opened and closed. Life continued with practiced indifference.

That was what unsettled her most.

She lay still beneath the thin blanket, staring at the ceiling, listening to the sounds of the palace waking. Everything sounded normal. Too normal. As though the night before had not asked anything of her. As though she had not knelt on cold stone and said yes to something she did not fully understand.

Her body ached. Not sharply, not painfully, but deeply. The kind of ache that came from holding yourself upright when every instinct told you to sit down. Her knees still remembered the chapel floor. Her hands remembered warmth that had not burned but had felt alive. Her chest felt tight, as if something new had taken up residence there and had not yet learned how to settle.

She pressed a hand over her heart and closed her eyes.

She had said yes.

The weight of it had not lifted with sleep. If anything, it felt heavier now, stripped of the quiet clarity the night had offered.

A soft knock sounded at the door.

“Come in,” Alina said, her voice rough with sleep.

Mara entered carrying a tray. Tea steamed gently in a chipped cup. Bread sat beside a small dish of honey. Simple things. Familiar things. Mara paused just inside the room, her eyes scanning Alina’s face the way she always did, looking for signs that words had not yet reached.

“Well?” Mara asked.

Alina pushed herself upright slowly. “It did not burn me.”

Mara snorted. “That would have caused paperwork.”

A weak smile tugged at Alina’s mouth. “It woke.”

Mara stilled. She set the tray down carefully and sat on the edge of the bed. “And you?”

Alina hesitated. Saying it aloud made it real in a way she was not sure she wanted. “I said yes.”

Mara reached for her hand and squeezed it, firm and grounding. “Then that will be enough for today.”

Alina let out a breath she had not realized she was holding. “I wish it felt like enough.”

“It will,” Mara said. “Eventually. Big things take time to settle into the bones.”

A harder knock interrupted them.

Mara frowned. “That one sounds important.”

The door opened without waiting for permission. Chancellor Elowen stepped inside, composed as ever, her expression already arranged into something polite and unyielding.

“The people are gathering,” Elowen said.

Alina swung her legs over the side of the bed. “I will not be displayed.”

Elowen’s gaze flicked briefly to Mara, then back. “Then you will be misunderstood.”

Alina met her eyes steadily. “Truth survives misunderstanding.”

Elowen smiled thinly. “As you wish.”

The council chamber felt wrong.

It had been rearranged overnight, as if someone had tried to force order into uncertainty. Maps were gone. In their place lay half-written proclamations, ink already drying. Chairs were pulled closer together, crowding the long table. The Crown was nowhere in sight.

King Roderic stood at the head of the table, his hands braced against the wood. He looked older than he had the night before. Not weaker, just tired in a way that ran deeper than sleep.

“The southern valley is failing,” Elowen said, wasting no time. “Faster than expected. Wells are turning brackish. Crops are dying where they stand.”

“We need action,” Lord Merrow added. “A sign.”

Alina folded her hands together, pressing her thumbs until she felt the sting. “A sign is not a solution.”

“It buys time,” Elowen replied.

“It buys silence,” Alina said. “And silence does not feed people.”

The room grew still.

“I will go to the valley,” Alina said.

Her father’s head snapped up. “You will not.”

“I will,” she replied gently. “Not as ruler. As listener.”

Elowen let out a short, humorless laugh. “You risk looking weak.”

Alina met her gaze. “I risk looking human.”

The silence that followed was thick and uncomfortable.

Finally, King Roderic nodded once. “She will go; quietly.”

Cael straightened near the door.

“No,” Alina said, turning toward him. “Your presence will turn listening into spectacle.”

Cael’s jaw tightened, but he nodded. “Then I will ride ahead. Make sure the road is clear.”

Alina hesitated, then inclined her head. “Thank you.”

They left before dawn.

There were no banners. No horns. No ceremony. Just the soft creak of leather, the sound of hooves against stone, and a small group slipping through the palace gates while the city still slept.

The land changed as they rode.

Stone gave way to dust. Green thinned into stubborn patches that clung to life more out of habit than hope. Villages appeared like questions written into the earth, each one carrying its own quiet desperation.

At the first settlement, no one bowed.

A woman stood in the road with her arms crossed, her face lined by sun and worry. “You are late,” she said.

Alina dismounted. “I know.”

The woman blinked, startled by the lack of excuses.

“My son is sick,” she said. “The healer says the wells are wrong.”

“Show me,” Alina replied.

They walked the village together. Alina listened. She knelt in dust beside a fevered child and held his small, burning hand. She tasted the water and fought the urge to grimace. She asked questions and made no promises she could not keep.

No proclamations were read.

No Crown was shown.

When Alina left, people watched her go, not with awe, but with something heavier.

Expectation.

By the next settlement, word had spread.

Some greeted her with relief. Others with suspicion. A few with open anger.

“You will fix this,” a man said, not asking.

Alina met his gaze. “I will not lie to you.”

That night, they made camp beneath a sky crowded with stars. The fire burned low. Guards spoke in murmurs. Sera sat apart, her gaze lifted toward the heavens.

Cael returned just before midnight, dust on his boots, his expression grave.

“Rumors are spreading,” he said quietly. “They say the Crown failed you. They say you are stalling.”

Alina closed her eyes briefly. The words stung, even though she had expected them. “Then the testing has begun.”

Cael studied her face in the firelight. “Do you regret coming?”

She shook her head. “No.”

The fire crackled. Somewhere beyond the camp, a child cried, then quieted.

Alina stared into the flames, feeling the weight of the path she had chosen settle more firmly on her shoulders.

Hope had awakened.

Now it would be tested.

Not in halls of power, but in dust and hunger and fear.

And Alina understood, with a clarity that both steadied and frightened her, that the next phase had begun not with triumph, but with resistance.

With truth walking into uncertainty without armor.

With a Crown that refused to be controlled.

And with a promise that would demand more of her than courage alone.

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