Ice Hockey Stud and His Best Friend's Sister Ulasan

i love your stories but i really think you should write down all the names and who they are with. in chapter 108 & 109 you've got Autumn has all of a sudden liking Calli, i thought she was married and having a baby in seven months time. i really think you need to rewrite these chapters

Continuity? Can’t keep story line straight you’re all over the place. In one paragraph a character had two different names. Is the sport football or hockey? I’ve tried to get into it. But nope. Maybe with editing it might be better

So looking forward to book 2

It’s a good story, but I think it needs a good editor. Also there are parts which keeps repeating. I get that they are into eachother, but almost every chapter is about the same complains. It would be nice to see more conversations & actions than complains :). Waiting for the new chaps x

Okay, Cody...... keep it up, this book is lit

It’s a great book but as another user said it could use some serious editing. Character names keep changing. Storylines keep changing. Features keep changing. You might get a little whiplash but the outline is very good.

I keep trying but the inconsistencies make it hard. Descriptions change, relationships change, back stories change. It needs a good going over.

I've loved reading this book. I can't wait for the update.

It's a good story, but there's a lot of continuity errors. First, you should look up how a hockey season goes because it does not end after American Thanksgiving nor do they play different teams during the playoffs. they play almost seven games against the same team before moving on to the next team