A fantastic and refreshing read with lots of actions.
it's simply easy to fall in love with the story
2023-08-20 16:37:12
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Dammy04
strong emotions used..making Monica feminine nature more weak..
Good one author
2023-08-20 06:56:48
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Shewrites
I like how the author started the story from the action.
First few sentences and I am already on the edge of my seat
Good one
2023-08-20 04:44:18
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Pearl
Monica will eventually rise above the obstacles because she has to protect her child. Kudos author, the story is awesome.
2023-08-20 04:18:06
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Jessica Charles
Oh dear Monica... I'm sure you'll pull through. Can't wait to see how it all turns out. This is a great story. Well done author
2023-08-20 03:15:49
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Issy_writes
it's a beautiful story and I can't wait to see how it ends. Monica is strong
2023-08-20 03:14:31
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Ogbuefi Onyeka
This would be a good adventure story...I will expect more in the remaining chapters
2023-06-25 21:41:58
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Delinda Schumacher
66 chapters 6-23-23
2023-06-24 03:53:00
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Jodie M
I had a hard time reading the book and stopped at chapter 15. The plot seems good but the grammatical errors were pretty bad and some of the terminology used was offensive. If you choose to read, be aware that English is likely not the author’s first language. Heavy editing would be appropriate.