Please continue the story, its sad that he died without knowing they cared, its also smart that you didn't continue the story because from the protagonists perspective died in the story
2026-06-06 09:04:12
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Arigo 101
[2] you completely fumbled Regina's character. You should've either made it so that she was always on his side and didn't like Tyler or made a completely new character who was.
2026-07-23 09:39:17
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[1] Regina's character seems inconsistent. We learn in Chapter 1 we learn she'd threatened to cripple his hands and practically cucked him the next chapter. Yet she's the one to reveal all the evidence in th end after he's dead?! Idk... This is obviously a book to turn your brain off to but you