This story is just confusing me at the beginning. Dinner mixing with break fast. Wasn't Alpha Dimitri a guest at Allison's pack? So why was he hosting an Aplhas meeting in the hall and why the Alphas ask him about getting a Luna for'this pack.' Alaobia Allison ' s other name Ariana.
2023-05-20 02:12:23
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Delinda Schumacher
77 chapters 5-10-23
2023-05-10 21:59:31
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Mauro Vandersmissen
The story started pretty good, tho the grammar made me cringe every 5 seconds besides it being hard to read and confusing. Almost halfway through the story derails, and we get something completely different before going back to the original characters but still different story.
2024-05-06 07:47:01
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Cass
I take it this authors first language is not English. The grammar and speech just doesn’t make sense most times.
2024-01-16 13:24:55
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Conie
I dont recommend this book,a lot of error’s,name mistaken identity and the female lead is not something to look forward..it’s irritating
2023-11-29 10:39:14
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Tracie B
The grammar is atrocious. The female lead is a waste ... ... ... ....
2023-12-28 05:38:45
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alannah Pennell
definitely not their first language. so many spelling mistakes making it incredibly hard to follow and then it's like different stories have been taken that don't even follow this story at all. waste of time