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Hi there, readers! I have a question I would like to ask all of you. If you've read any of my previous books, you'll note that my chapters aren't really that long. I've wanted to keep these chapters in short bursts like I did with Nikolai and Dimitri's book, but I am finding that there's just too much happening with Umiko and Fenriz that it is impossible to keep the chapters short. The reason why I used to keep my chapters below 2k words is because the more words I write per chapter, the more you pay to unlock them.
So my question is, did you guys like the long chapter where Fenriz and Umiko claimed one another, even though it cost you a bit more? Should I continue with my longer chapters? Please let me know, your feedback is very much appreciated!
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Alpha Fenriz Chapter 31 - Umiko
“There’s something different about you,” my mother remarks while looking me up and down with narrowed eyes. We’re currently having breakfast together before we start our day, and I’ve been in her presence for less than ten minutes before she said this. Can people see when you’ve had sex for the first time? Oh, Gods, does she know?! I play coy and shrug. “I have developed confidence since becoming a Luna, mother. There are people who depend on my council,” I say with my back ramrod straight. Her brows continue to furrow when she looks at me, then she offers me a tight-lipped smile and reaches for my hand to give it a squeeze. “It is lovely to hear the confidence in your voice and to actually see it for myself. I feared for your life when your father told me who he wanted to give you to; in fact, I didn’t even expect you to still be alive right now.” She admits, shaking her head. I expected the same, but I won’t tell her that. “You do not have to worry, mother, Fenriz treats me w
Alpha Fenriz Chapter 32 - Fenriz
Why the fuck did I have to be on the other side of Vegas now?! It’s taken me an hour to get to the hotel Umiko’s parents are in, and I’ve had a bad feeling since I called and found that they’ve checked out.I swear to the old Gods, if they hurt her, I will rain hell down on that fucking Tsukishima and his pussy Yakuza clan./“Alpha, we have… there’s a problem,”/ Marcus’ voice finally reaches me over the mind link, and my heart stills. /“Speak!”/ I growl and feel his cringing away from my voice./“Uhm… It’s Luna Umiko, Alpha. I’m not sure what’s wrong, but she seems to be in a state of shock and is refusing to speak.”/On the way here, I’ve felt nothing but dread burying deep in my heart, and the fact that I cannot get a hold of Umiko is stressing me the fuck out. Now he’s telling me she’s refusing to speak. If I have to wage war against her fucking family because of this, then they’re all dead already. I stop my car in front of the hotel and rush towards where Marcus says he’s found
Alpha Fenriz Chapter 33 - Fenriz
Umiko has stopped crying, but now her silence is filling the room. We arrived home a few hours ago, and I’ve been holding her until she eventually calmed down and dozed off. It has only been a short while, but I already miss her voice; her accent, the gentleness of her tone, and how she drives me crazy just by calling me her Alpha. Now I don’t know when I’ll hear it again; I don’t know if we’ll ever fix what her father has done to her. I let out a sigh and held her closer to me. /“Baron, any news?”/ I ask my beast since he’s been quiet for hours already. Right now, that fox is the only one who can tell us what happened to Umiko. /“She’s refusing to speak to me,”/ Baron says in an annoyed huff. /“I didn’t want to bother you until I had an answer.”/ /“Thank you; please keep at it until we get to New York. I feel like Kai will be able to help us with this, and since he owes me a debt, he cannot refuse.”/ I say and see him nod in agreement. The Wolf God would be more help than anything
Alpha Fenriz Chapter 34 - Umiko
Fenriz and I have just returned to our hotel room after meeting with an Alpha who scared me half to death. On the way there, he explained that the Alpha and his Luna are both reincarnations of their Gods, but even knowing this didn’t prepare me enough. Good thing Fenriz has him as an ally; apparently, they’ll be able to help us tonight. Alpha Kai saw Ahmya’s cloak immediately, while Baron and Fenriz were still blind to it. I wonder if Kenji has something to do with it. Speaking of which…/“Did you hear what the Moon Goddess said?”/ I say to Ahmya since she is the only person I seem to be able to communicate with. She has been quiet since my father left; in fact, I’ve barely sensed her since the bind, not that I’ve wanted to speak with her, though. But that Luna saw something when she touched me, and it has to do with the sick relationship Ahmya has with Kenji./“She doesn’t know what she’s talking about,”/ Ahmya purrs and barely lifts her head to my question. I can’t help but feel a
Alpha Fenriz Chapter 35 - Umiko
I stand at a distance and watch as Alpha Kai’s Lycan, Loki, converses with Fenriz’s Baron. Loki is huge, his size clearly double that of Baron and as broadly built as Kai himself; his claws are the size of a grown man’s index finger, while his teeth look like they could bite an arm clean off. They’ve been talking for over forty minutes, but I sense no bloodlust from either of them; no, all I can sense is a brotherly love. “They’ll be at it for a while,” Caterina’s voice comes from behind me, and when I turn around, I see the sweet smile on her face. “Loki has missed his little brother.” I can do nothing but nod when she speaks; then, when she places a hand on me, her eyes turn golden brown, and the smile has vanished from her face. “Know this, fox, Baron never betrayed you; what you saw was an image projected by the one you now proclaim to love. You started this war, and you need to finish it.” She says, then lets go of my shoulder and takes a step back from me. I watch as Ahmya’
Alpha Fenriz Chapter 36 - Fenriz
Umiko has a slight smile on her face as she looks out of the window of our private jet; I suppose she has all the reason in the world to smile. It will take a little while, but her voice will return, then she’ll be able to tell me everything that happened that day. Of course, I’m happy as fuck that I heard her voice again after a few days and that her first words were that she loved me. I’m so glad; I really am happy.But every silver lining has a cloud; in my case, it’s a fucking mushroom cloud.Some part of me wished we never went to New York, albeit only a tiny part of me feels that way. My mate will talk again, and we’ve figured out her father’s goal, so there’s that major breakthrough. But after Caterina spoke with me before we left, I was in two minds about everything. What she said cannot be true; it’s fucking impossible./“Then why do I sense that you want it to be true?”/ Baron suddenly asks, and literally fucking stuns me with that question. Did I want it to be true? /“No,
Alpha Fenriz Chapter 37 - Umiko
How is it that sex can change you from a completely innocent and shy version to someone you barely even recognize?“Hmmm,” I moaned during a particularly dirty dream involving Fenriz and his rough hand. He caresses my skin with his kisses, his rough, stubbled beard leaving goosebumps in their wake. “Please,” I beg as his kisses move downward, and he stops at my mound, splaying my sex open just for him to admire. When he looks up at me, he lets out a growl filled with so much need that his irises split…and when his tongue meets my clit, I let out an unrestrained moan.A moan that sounded too loud to be a dream.I wrench my eyes open, and my back arches from the bed when I feel Fenriz in between my legs pleasuring me. His tongue works circles around my hard nub while he has two fingers pumping away inside of me.“Fenriz,” I moan out his name for the first time in days, and as soon as I do, he stops his assault from between my legs, and I gasp when he slams his hardened cock painfully i
Alpha Fenriz Chapter 38 - Fenriz
I’m standing on the border of DC and am aware that if I step over, the Horsemen warriors will descend on me and take me to their Alpha. It doesn’t bother me, though, since that’s exactly what I’m hoping for.In my father’s memories, Mia had said that her brother was aware of her need to escape and would help her leave the States. So, for over ten years, the simmering war between Ryker and I has been for nothing, and the agreement between us has been null and void since he broke it.And here I thought there was honor in being an MC president.I take a step over the threshold, and not even five minutes later, I hear the rumbling of Harley’s in the distance. Chuckling, I take a slow walk with my hands tucked into the pockets of my jeans and wait for them to encircle me. I decided to ditch the suit today and wear my usual biker attire with my hair loose; there’s no point in trying to look proper in front of a man who knows where my sons are hidden away.Five men eventually surround me, an
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