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Ashley's pov

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Comments (8)

Ogone Tong

And he chose to only come now?? Stupid security Sies

Mary Pownell-Styer

Where was this stupid security guard when she needed him? Also, why the dork is Blake blaming her for this other dudes actions! She didn’t do anything wrong!

agz.met47

Geez I agree with everyone else here writer…hard to like Blake after the way he just treated Ashley…

Cathyd

victim blaming now and He's meant to love Her? this is absolutely sickening disgusting I cannot believe I just read a rape then this straight after like WTF and him claiming her body when Hes been f***ing everyone this is vile

Nurture*

my coins could've skipped this chapter. i cant see how you expect us to like Blake when you pencil him this way. I hope you fixed it moving forward. She seems more intelligent that this weakling she's developing into.

Gabb Ch

Stupid chapter, that’s all I’m going to say.

Emily Struna

That follows after he beat the guy up.should be him coming to her rescue maybe holding her while she calms down.waiting to talk later. Him taking her home. In no way is any of the conversation they have necessary or appropriate after what just happened to her.

Emily Struna

Just some serious words of advise.I enjoy your stories and read all your work.but I would rewrite/change this entire chapter.he doesn’t need to blame her at all.ruins this entire relationship and his reputation to how the readers now see him. Also they don’t need to have the conversation/argument

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