Plot and style was very promising just need some revisions and it'll be perfect.
2022-11-05 16:43:37
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Deborah
Really good and riveting read. Best wishes to the author.
2022-10-16 08:49:16
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EG Napolereyes
amazing stories
2022-05-21 19:43:13
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Queen Harvey
Loved book, but ending seemed rushed, left many questions unanswered. Even if Myra set up her pregnancy, who came to the rescue of the baby and gave him to his father? Even the birth of the second child seemed an afterthought.
2023-06-19 11:05:50
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Allie
The book would be great if not for the errors, inconsistencies and unnecessary drama. The wrong character names were used and thoughts were repeated. The ending was rushed and there are unanswered questions. It felt like the book had multiple writers who couldn’t decide on the storyline.
2024-05-12 20:03:49
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Lair El Greco
Would've been great if not for the inconsistency of the plot. The author may have been torn which direction to follow while writing this story.