Another wonderful story thank you Birdy !!! You’re truly talented :) ...
2023-04-24 03:39:54
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Ever
Easy read. Not too dark. Enjoyed the story. I know some say it’s similar to another book. In some ways it is but it’s really only some elements and this one stands on it own in my opinion at least.
2022-09-07 03:37:49
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Sarah
This story is great and you are a great author
2022-03-16 02:41:14
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Sarah
You have a repeat of the same chapter
2022-03-12 23:21:57
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LeoCat
Great story!! Although parts were difficult to read (most stories that include dramatic story and character arcs as well as an amount of ugly truths are), the story would have suffered without them. When all is said and done, definitely worth a read.
2022-09-09 10:43:20
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Bianca Maasdorp
story is average. nothing exciting. almost like another story I read that was better
2022-03-15 16:52:34
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Shavone Jordan
I'll give credit for a slightly diffrent approach to the ending but this is early a knock off of "The Alpha kings hated slave" by Adira Daisy. know authors get inspiration from other stories but their are so many direct copies from that story. if interested other story is MUCH longer and detailed.
2022-07-31 22:07:46
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Grim Reaper
While I like the basic premise, it just seemed like you gave away too much of the story in the beginning. There was no real suspense, I felt like I didn't have anything to look forward to