I agree some of the chapters are too descriptive and the reader feels robbed BUT is a nice story. If the ending is chapter 150 it was a huge down. I wished the author had brought us closure with Mac. Would have loved to see her Father flourish. Definitely a wedding or the mating at least.
2023-12-27 04:03:08
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Dan Dan
Absolutely love this!
Kept me reading all night long ......
2023-07-19 19:59:37
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Delinda Schumacher
90 chapters 5-9-23
2023-05-10 00:15:03
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shalomm_m
Very thrilling book, I love the description and how you can feel the tension all through!
2023-04-07 19:15:07
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Pi98
Firstly, as interesting as the mystery is, it’s now Chapter 45 & it’s exhausting reading in this girl’s convoluted thoughts! Where is the dialogue? Is this being translated from another language? Phrasing is awkward, spelling begs checking, grammar is minimal.
2023-06-04 01:46:47
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Pi98
Chapters 131 through 138 are reposted duplicates of Chapter 130. This is cheating. I want a refund so I can read better books with actual new content.
2023-07-05 12:08:19
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Mercy
The book looks intriguing but keeps going round in circles, with too many unnecessary descriptions.
A full chapter only for describing an item in one person's thought, making it boring.
Well, not my kind of read anymore... ciao