Haunted Reviews

nice story ! do u have any inquiries that i can keep in touch with you ? I have sth to discuss about the book

read the first CHAPTER and I can't put the book down

woah 😮😮 mysterious and scary I love it ❤❤😍😍 can't wait to dive in and read more

I love how mysterious the storyline is. The synopsis doesn't reveal much and I love that. But I have to be really blunt here... you've got a shit ton of editing to do. You might think I'm just saying it for saying sake but I actually read a few chapters and I can't lie... I cringed.

gripping and exciting so far. we will see later on.

To start with: Synopsis. I noticed that there's no space after a punctuation. Everything looks jam-packed and it is a very high turn off for me personally because—aside from the cover—the synopsis is the next thing I look at. Please, try to edit it.