Luna's Power Reviews

nice story

Hope the story is written better than the blurb :-(

There's way too much repeating here. 6 chapters read and I give up!!!!!!

Well, I certainly can't say I am disappointed (although I really am). This story should be yanked, edited with corrections, then reposted. Grammar is awful, especially use of gender pronouns. :-(

Very poorly written, needs to be properly edited. Don't waste time on this

the author really needs to learn English grammar.