This is a great story, that everyone should read. I recommend this story for everyone.
2023-10-28 12:19:31
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lfk53260
I liked the story, it was great! But for me it was very hard to read it, a almost gave up on it multiple times, since theres a lot of mistakes on genders and past/present tenses. I know my english isn't great as it's my second language, but still. Very hard to read and understand
2023-10-16 22:05:09
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Kat
Too much repeatition
2023-09-18 23:49:39
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Tang Chang
short and sweet. loved it.
2023-09-10 09:19:06
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nibbi halu
Love this story
2023-03-13 11:10:42
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muttispencer
Story line ok but muddled up in some places and characters disappear.
2023-12-01 21:03:26
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JaOlon
I had to stop reading after Chapter 17 because the grammar was bad. The writer does not write well in English. Pronouns were wrong and sentences were simplistic and choppy.