Good story, but I don’t think he worked enough to redeem himself. Also, best hot scenes were not with Caramel which is a bit sad. And I would have loved to see his POV for those moments.
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Allie
This book has potential. However, it needs to be edited. It has a lot of inconsistencies and the author wrote about topics that she was not familiar with, so many scenes were incomplete and not believable. There were also sentences that had first person and third person intermingled.