58-60 also seem out of place (ch's 56-60 might've been an alternate beginning to the novel?)
2024-08-10 13:20:19
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EveeJ
Loving this book so far!! Just a heads-up, you can probably skip chapters 56 & 57..56 seems like a flashback that doesn't add more than what you already know by then, and 57 seems also like a flashback but with a LOT of confusion - typos, wrong names, wrong brothers - that also don't add much
2024-08-10 13:02:36
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Anna
I loved the book
2024-06-22 03:18:18
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Dawn Grant
Fantastic!!
2024-04-18 09:43:03
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Crystal Pebblez
Who will Zephyra finally end up with? Jovan or Lirael.... let the game begin
2024-04-12 22:36:02
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Lady GLOW
This story touches my life in a special way. Thank you writers
2024-04-12 21:20:49
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Purple Ink
Wow! I’m intrigued. I just hope Zephyra makes the right choice
2024-04-12 19:20:54
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Shield Nazo Philips
Somehow, I could relate to this story. reminds me of some memories I can't change. Dear Author, Kudos to you.
2024-04-12 18:17:07
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Dark Mage
A hate-to-lovers book? Count me in. I love possesive men who take time to fall in love. I know this one won't disappoint.