Your writing style is simple. Simply relaxing and beautiful.
2024-09-04 11:12:29
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Ms.aries@17
maganda po yung flow, kahit nosebleed na ko, diretso pa rin. hehe.
2022-08-07 11:29:16
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Juvy Pem
Woww, highly recommended ...
2022-08-05 05:48:47
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ghost the gray
a very interesting story the writing flows so naturaly that you don't notice how much you've read until the next chapter is locked ...
definitely a must read for fantasy lovers!
2022-05-29 13:36:50
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Bethel-Gold
I am giving this book a five star review, this should be the best magical book I read and went past the 3rd chapter
hats off to you author, I look forward to reading more chapters.
2021-12-14 03:42:05
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Alexandra
I was genuinely surprised by the originality of the premise. The writing is also superb. Off to a great start.
2021-12-13 15:10:13
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Mo Marie
Absolutely love the concept and the world building done in this story. Dorin is very sweet and endearing and seeing the world through his eyes is fantastic! I do think there could be a bit more dialogue so there's not so much exposition and telling but that's definitely an easy fix! Very fun!