Phoenix Reviews

this is a good story! the writing is awesome, the characters are really well defined. my only big issue is the punctuation! there's no break between people talking or thinking you go from one person and one paragraph, and then another person in a different paragraph and you have to stop and think

please proofread your book! the book is fantastic! the punctuation is awful! there is no break between one person talking and then the next person, it all blurs together, then you have to figure out who's talking or thinking! please put some kind of break between people talking!!!!!

where is the second book this was great

please update more often. fantastic job so far.

56 chapters 10/19/2025

Are we going to get updates? Or can you tell me how often updates are?

47 chapters 9/10/2025

great read... loved the ups, downs and the suspense... i love to read a spin off specially where the story ended... even the next generation has so many possibilities... so eagerly awaiting for the next storyline...