I like the story line! I just feel that the language is stiff and the dialogue too formal, especially between Anya and Asher. The story needs some finessing to make it sound more natural.
2025-07-02 16:06:27
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Henry Nwuba
Interesting
2024-12-24 16:22:26
3
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Zammie
Omg!! What a nice story. Keep it up...
2024-09-28 18:52:00
2
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Veronica Obi
The Father Of My Twins. ( ╹▽╹ )
2024-09-04 17:59:21
3
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Chinwuba Adorah
(✯ᴗ✯) (≧▽≦) 。◕‿◕。
2024-08-31 15:08:55
5
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Tina Nwuba
I have edited all the chapters of 'The Father Of My Twins', readers. please feel free to read, vote with plenty of gems and also leave a review. And pardon me if you see or spot any error or mistakes.
2024-07-12 19:04:54
5
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Tina Nwuba
14 chapters left to be edited. pwetty readers, I've tried my best to edit this book as I can. if you still see any errors, pwease pardon me.
2024-06-03 19:00:21
6
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Mary Byrd-Edwards
I really enjoyed this book. It was different and exciting. I give this book 5 STARS!
2024-04-21 04:37:45
4
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Tina Nwuba
Pwetty readers, I've made my decision to edit all the chapters of "The Father Of My Twins". currently, chapter 1 is already edited, and for you to see the edited version, you have to remove the book from your library and re-add it again.