The Heartless Alpha’s Beloved Luna Reviews

To the author Jane Above Story, Please finish this depressing story already and let it have a happy ending for Gideon and Avery. My goodness what a way to drag a story! 10 years later and they are still apart and and suffering. Some hard times are understandable, but to drag it on for so long...

I just finished the last chapter! I loved the book! I can’t wait for more chapters! ......

READ ALL THE REVIEWS! THEY'RE DELETING 1-STAR REVIEWS! story goes on a loop. I should've listened to the reviews before wasting my time AND POINTS with this book

i know it starts strong but LISTEN- go read something else. i’ve wasted so much time watching ads thinking it’ll get better. +500 chapters and 400 are filler chapters. plus author can’t follow through her own plot or remember details of her own book.. trust me when i say FIND ANOTHER BOOK.

Oh, no 1 star reviews are allowed? It started nicely, author can write, but this book just endlessly drags a cycle of abuse and humiliation of the FL. The alpha is mentally deficient and disgusting. He just falls for his mistress’ tricks and mistreats the FL, who becomes stupid and spineless herself

512 chapters for what… 3-6 pages each, sure “3000” pages, could have easily done it in 10-20 page chapters like actual books like real authors and still made money, but hey this author is all about greed and dragging things on ...‍♀️

Don’t waste your time it’s good up till 250

The author drags the story out half of us been begging for her to go ahead and end it

I fucking love this book!

Don’t buy, I’m up to chapter 500+ have paid a fortune and it just ends. Wtf