Endings are crucial. An agent who reads a full manuscript will judge the ending harshly. Does it deliver on the promises of the premise? Is it emotionally satisfying? Does it feel rushed or contrived? A weak ending can sour an otherwise strong manuscript.
They also consider the ending's commercial appeal. Is it a cliffhanger that sets up a sequel? Is it a tear-jerker that will get people talking? A definitive, hopeful ending for a standalone? The type of ending signals the author's intentions and the project's market positioning. An agent needs to know how to pitch that ending to editors. A confusing or downbeat ending can be a hard sell, even if it's artistically valid.
The romantic subplot, if present, needs to feel organic and not forced. Chemistry between characters is something agents can sense quickly. If the love interest feels like a cardboard cutout inserted to meet genre expectations, it weakens the whole story. The relationship should complicate the protagonist's journey, not just provide a distraction.
Agents also look for healthy dynamics or, if the dynamic is intentionally toxic, a clear narrative awareness of that toxicity. YA has moved past glorifying possessive, controlling relationships as romantic. Modern agents are attuned to these nuances and will flag relationships that feel regressive or harmful without narrative purpose. A well-drawn, believable relationship can be a huge selling point.
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