Let's be real, most of the 'Kou x Mitsuba' stuff I've seen leans way too hard on the whole 'sunshine x grumpy' trope and completely glosses over how emotionally complex Kou's grief and Mitsuba's post-death existence are. It's not just about banter or shy blushes. If you want to make it believable, you need to anchor it in their shared trauma from the 'Severance' arc. How does Kou, who carries guilt for not being able to save him the first time, interact with a Mitsuba who's a constructed memory, aware of his own fragility? That tension is the core. Their relationship is built on a foundation of loss and a desperate, magical second chance that's already ticking down. The most believable fics I've read explore that—the quiet moments where Kou is overly protective not out of romance, but out of terror of failing again, and Mitsuba's sharp edges softening because, for maybe the first time, someone sees him as someone to protect, not just a nuisance. Avoid making it purely fluffy. The melancholy is the point. It gives any eventual warmth so much more weight.
Also, don't make Mitsuba a damsel. He's spiteful, proud, and deeply insecure. His vulnerability should come through in ways he'd hate—like hesitating before taking Kou's hand, or making a sarcastic comment to cover up that he's genuinely touched. Kou, on the other hand, isn't just a generic nice guy. His kindness is stubborn and action-oriented, but he's also wrestling with his role as an exorcist and his feelings for a supernatural entity. The conflict isn't just 'do they like each other,' it's 'can this even work, and what does it mean if it does?' That's where the real story is. I always click away from fics that turn them into a standard school romance; it just feels like it misses what makes their dynamic painfully interesting in the first place.