Author, please clear out your thoughts! What's really your main goal with this novel of yours? your storyline is chaotic confusing, your scenes jumping from one to another, your ML Richard seems useless, just a decorative character? Don't want to read further, gave me a headache!
2025-04-12 09:18:07
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Christine Owings
38 chapters 12/14/24
2024-12-15 12:26:40
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Heather W
this is one of those books that would be interesting if you could understand wtf was happening.
2025-02-26 22:10:26
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Chris
132 chapters 2/8/26 seems to be taking awhile to finish.
2026-02-09 02:04:39
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Sharmir Johnson
I'm so confused.....idk what's happening........Might read more to see if I can figure it out.....