The story has potential so I am adding this to my library, tho the first chap needs a bit editing, I can see that the next chao would be interesting!!
2021-02-04 18:53:46
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hlongwanezethembis
So love ur PROLOGUE very nice AUTHOR 😊😊😊😊
2021-01-26 23:41:10
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jengreyy
The book has potential but needs major editing. I, myself is not so good in English too but I still write. The trick is knowing how to use simple words and research a lot..good luck with your work😇😇😇.
2021-01-20 16:51:02
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Xoxo
sorry for the last message my keyboard disturbs a little. hope you're I love the story and sorry for not updating by next week I will try to do so☺️☺️
2020-12-18 02:23:26
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Xoxo
comment please
2020-12-18 02:17:14
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Joy Teo
While the writing might need some editing, one cannot deny that the author is a gifted storyteller. She writes in a way that you can feel the main character, Tiara's anguish when she chooses her father over her mother and brother. Am definitely going to add this to my library.
2021-02-20 16:30:43
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Mahreeyam
nice story but there is some errors
I'm sorry for being blunt 🤗