Alpha's Deceit: The Omega's Revenge Reviews

If you are going to title the chapters, please use numeric equivalents instead of spelling out the numbers! SSSSOOOOOO MUCH EASIER THAT WAY!

The author needs to go back and proofread her work. The name changes are ridiculous and confusing.

I love the storyline but the wrong names or change of names takes a big chunk of the experience. Please go through and fix POVs and change‘James’ to Logan to solve a lot of misunderstandings

This has great potential with only a couple chapters in with the exception that the sentences go from first person to third person. Just an example, Is "my hand moved to her side" meant to be "my hand moved to MY side" or "HER hand moved to her side"? Pick one and stick with it.

The Author kept mixing up the characters names and changing already established plots. I stopped reading at chapter 6, because the more I read the more confusing it becomes. If the Author can’t be bothered to read her own story, then she can’t blame readers for not wanting to read it either.

character names change and changes from first to third person very confusing won't be finishing this story