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Great Book, she needs to fix the pronouns

Good story, needs some editing

I have to say I love this book I can't wait for book 2 I'm hoping it's Layan and Priscillas story...️

Why do you keep referring to the female characters that you call queen and have said they gave birth with male pronouns and then the male characters with female pronouns? It’s a good story, but this makes it confusing.

Hello! Is the story still ongoing? Is there any schedule for the updates of the book?

Enjoying the story however the only difficulty is when author is calling Nebraska or other females - he or him instead of - She or her, it’s just a small glitch that could be corrected. Other then that I like the story so far

good story plot, but too many typos... especially when identifying genders.. way too confusing.

Please please PLEASE go back and fix the pronoun problem. This book has potential but it’s a headache trying to figure out who is talking about what because the male is referred to as her and the female referred to his/him 50% of the time! It’s not consistent! So disappointing.

I think you really need to go through the book again and edit to correct the grammar. The story is enjoyable but I can't actually continue reading because of the poor grammar