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Gabby and Malison's summer narrations

Author: Ella Bliss
last update Last Updated: 2022-09-08 23:21:14

Annie's P.O.V

      I'm that type of girl who loves listening to other people's love stories. It kinda gives me this sweet feeling within and I don't know, it doesn't seem to wanna go away, even now. As Gabby narrates her summer experience, talking about the fun she had and the guy she met, I feel butterflies dancing in my belly.

“So did you guys like kiss?". I asked as I crossed my legs.

“Of course, we did. Gosh, our bodies were heated and… he didn't want to let go. From the car, we came out and laid on the ground, then resumed our intense kissing. I would have been worried that someone might see, but I wasn't. Plus, the lights were out. I mean, if you go watch a romantic movie with a hot guy, it's expected that you make out right?". Gabby asked 

“Right". I and Malison concurred..

“Not like he is as hot as your cousin though, but he was good looking". I rolled my eyes. She always finds a way to bring my cousin into everything. “His breath against my face was just so awesome and it sent shivers down my spine. I didn't want it to end though". She sighed. 

“But it did". She continued. “We had to meet two fucking days before he leaves". She murmured.

“Well, did you get his number?". Malison asked. 

“He took mine, but he hasn't texted". Gabby replied .

“Damn. Did he tell you anything about himself?". It seems Malison was just reading my mind. 

”Well, his name is Dustin like I said earlier, and he is twenty. He has a car, his parents live in Casablanca, while he lives in England. He likes sports, uhm..".

“Thats enough. She meant, did he maybe give you his home address?". I asked, looking to Malison to see if I spoke her mind, and I did as she nodded in support.

“Well, he didn't quite…". She tried to recall. ”But he did tell me that he usually visits a bar like that every Friday". She replied.

”Great!! Well, you just have to remember the name of the bar". I said.

”Wait, where are you driving at?". Gabby asked with squinted brows.

“To find him duhhh!". Malison replied.

”What? No! Sheesh". She eyed me. ”Malison, how did your summer go?'.

”You know I went to spend time with my brother. I thought it was gonna be boring, but it wasn't. He took me to few parties and took me around, it was really fun".

“Okay? Then any guy?". I asked, running impatient.

“Not really..". She shook her head and we, I and Gabby, groaned loudly. ”But…", she cut us off. ”There was this guy…". She was doing this deliberately, to get us on our toes. ”I met him at one of the parties, I got his number, we talked, we kissed, and we almost did it.."., She chuckled and squealed a little..

Yeah, we were all virgins. This was one of the things we were gonna do during our senior year. 

All the other girls havw done it, our formal friends has done it, and they told us how amazing it was and all that.

“Really? Wow, tell us what happened?". I urged..

”How it started..". Malison continued

“and why it didn't happen". I ended. 

”Alright alright.. So I was really drunk from all the shots, but I could still tell what was happening around me. I sat down on a couch as I was really dizzy and then someone sat besides me. It was the same guy I had danced with. I tried tracking another drink, but he took it away from me and pulled me up. He led me to a room, all the way, scolding me like he was my brother or something. Then, we got to the room, he let me fall on the bed, hut I didn't fall alone, cause I pulled him along. He was shocked, and the impact made my hair fly around my face. He used his hands to push them off.

 I wasn't sure which one of us closed the space in between our faces, but the space was gone, and his lips were on mine, hand leaving my face to grip my hip, pulling my dress up. My arms were looped around his neck, and I matched the ferocity of his kiss, pulling his body even closer to mine. I pulled his shirt iver his head, and I let out a frustrated growl when It was taking too long for it to come off completely. He  yanked the strap of my dress down, exposing my breasts. My nipples were standing erect, just waiting for his mouth. He grabbed them both, kneading them roughly. He placed a kiss on each nipple before wrapping his mouth around one, sucking hard. My hand flew to the back of his head, gripping his curls. The heat it shot to my core almost pushed me over the edge. He continued to suckle on both of my breasts until I couldn't take it anymore. I pulled his head up, breathing heavily..". Gosh, I was wet from the descriptive narration. Did I forget to tell you that Malison was a good writer? Fuck!!

“...Then I told him that I wanted him to take me, and without waiting for his response, I pushed him off me, then licked my lips and grabbed him by his teal pants, unbuttoning and then unzipping it. He stared down at me with a carnal look, mouth parting as I yanked his pants down along with his briefs, releasing his throbbing cock. I let out a breath as I stared at his thick member, it was just so big and so…oh Lord..". She groaned. 

“But then, when I was about to put his cock into my mouth, he stopped me. I was shocked, and he didn't give me any explanation, he just put his cock back in, got up and left the room. After that day, I didn't go out, and never saw him". She narrated.

”Fuck! What a tale Mali!". 

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