Fun story. The only drawback is when the author(s) translate from one language to another names and genders get mixed up and kills the flow of the story. Also timelines and ages get messy too. My only suggestion is to find a proof reader to help. But overall- good story.
2025-01-03 05:53:05
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Ruth C.
Good story, but it needs some editing. The grammar and work choice makes it a little hard to read smoothly.
2024-09-02 08:07:55
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Sarah
feels AI generated. very repetitive.
2024-06-27 11:12:29
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Shen Li
What’s the point of publishing a story that never focuses on the main leads? We only get side characters POV. Plus, this story is too slow dragging on forever. There’s very little info related to the plot & it’s getting annoying that the FL isn’t doing anything.
2024-07-20 14:44:48
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Kenielya Brown
Uhm this story is called billionaire’s regret after rebirth. That means she gets punished by everyone including the man and dies, resurrects exacts revenge and STILL gets back with the man considering the title focuses on him and his regrets stories like this are just not good