รีวิว Brother I'm yours

Great novel tbh

so good ...

I see the light .........

This is absolutely one of my favorites... I'm so happy that everything worked out in the end, thanks author you are an amazing writer. You kept me at the edge and wanting to read more, I love it

recommended ...

how many chapters are left author?

This is so good. I feel every emotional thing that is happening. (srry)

I haven't read it yet in full. Though I must admit that I'm getting loss in reading sometimes due to sudden changing in dialogue it's like in one chapter it's Aaron and Ederic then next you would realized it's dallin and Ryan then back to Aaron and Ederic.

Generally the story is good. Though to be honest, I think somehow the story loss it's essence. I mean judging from the title and the description you might think that it's about Ederic and Aaron. It is better if the story focused on them. It might be short but at least it is still on the right track.