Brother Luck(not) Reviews

110 chapters 3-13-24

I’m enjoying this. I agree with the wovina person but I’m still giving 5 stars.

I like it but I’m tired of her always leaving him and frankly am not digging the betrayal and where it’s going. Next the one night stand will be preggo and she MFC will decide to give up yet another baby and then cry about it. I’m frustrated and impatient. Update more too pls.

The story has potential but I wasn’t feeling the first few chapters. The writer has a sense of humor though which their readers will love. My main problem was chapter transition. The chapters wasn’t cohesive to me. It’s like when you’re listening to music & 1 song ends abruptly b4 the next begins.

Longer chapters please…….

The more I think of this, the madder I am. The writer needs to fix this. I do not like Axelles betrayal. Maybe she just needs to be done with his psycho ass. Take her baby ,go live near Oracle, and build a nice life away from all the crazy. After all the crap he did to be with her and now this BS.