Nobody is talking about horrifically inconsistent it is. First the trip is to the Caribbean but then it’s to Norway for the northern lights? It’s AI slop. Why is Axel on some list and gave up his seat for Ember? But it doesn’t matter because they both withdrew That literally makes no sense.
2026-06-16 10:54:03
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Debbie
I love longer stories if im going to pay to read it.
2025-06-07 00:00:31
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Liz Allen
Why can’t we get past chapter 8 without becoming a member? Sucks that you get us drawn in and then not giving us a way to finish without joining and from what I’ve seen even that doesn’t help
2025-05-16 06:48:52
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Leah Sunbury
Good story, but I kept wanting to correct the grammatical errors. It occurred to me though that English may not be the author's first language.
2025-05-14 16:58:26
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Helen Wilcox
Good but can't open past Chapter 7. paid good money as well.