nice book and I love Kathy and how often is the updates?
2024-02-14 00:06:05
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Delinda Schumacher
95 chapters 4-17-23
I'm not sure if this book is completed?
I don't want to invest my time and money if it is abandoned ...
2023-04-18 05:00:01
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krushandkill
The synopsis hints that this story has more in it than it seems.
The chapters need some editing, but nothing that damages the story as it is right now. The ML is easily hated, but I bet there is more about him than the first chapters shows.
2021-10-11 18:31:25
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M.Z. Mauve
pretty good start. enough descriptive imagery. the blurb was okay. seems like there's enough conflict to keep the story interesting. the blurb needs some proofreading, as well as the first chapters (typos, tense consistency issues, punctuation, etc.). overall, nice work
2021-10-06 08:08:20
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vii
wow! this story is so heart touching
2021-10-04 00:02:47
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A.R.Sanusi
I love the way the author makes me imagine the feelings of the protagonists. it's just amazing.