Nice work, baby! Keep update and reach your dream ❤️
2021-02-06 23:26:15
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Dahyafaka
Thank u to all of u who have read my story, sorry if my story still has many flaws. If u want to provide criticism and suggestions, please use polite language. Lastly, don't forget to give 5 stars for my story. Thank you so much 🙏❤
2021-01-13 16:46:36
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BebbyShin
it's amazing story! Really like it. GOOD JOB, AUTHOR
2020-11-14 22:16:33
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Siti Wandari
love this story
2020-11-14 11:32:45
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Nur kumala sari
Like this story
2020-11-14 09:36:19
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Wardah Habiba
Every part I read always makes emotions, really the plot is not boring. Please pay attention to some punctuation, keep up spirit-!!
2020-10-26 19:56:23
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Qoni tah
I like the groove. But in my opinion, there are some sentences and punctuation that are a little annoying. But no problem, it can be fixed. Keep Spirit
2020-10-26 19:33:50
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Meihao de Xiwang
good job.......mmm...
2020-10-21 18:36:27
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Vee_ernawaty
i like this story'... good job Thor ❤️?
2020-10-21 17:30:51
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Siapa Aku
I like the story, and there is a little advice from me, I think there are some punctuation that is a little wrong, but it doesn't matter, it can still be fixed.