Can I call you Honey Reviews

Good ending

not able to read. very confusing and lot of grammatical mistakes

good job author

Grammatical errors are hilarious... Correct usage of pronouns is a must... Please edit your work...

The used of he, she, her & his are very confusing.. can't read anymore after few lines of chapter 1

I not able to read this story properly as the female character is confusing. Please use name that the author and the reader will not mixed it up.

sorry couldn't read this had to drop it couldn't even finish the first chapter the name mix up gave me a headache I wonder what it will take you authors to just proof read your work,we pay money to read at least make it worth it