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Chapter 6: Public Proving

Author: Mercy Babe
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The invitation was clipped to the inside of the envelope with a single black pin: Proving Night — Public. The word thudded against my ribs like a warning bell and a siren at once. Public. The syllable crawled over my skin, igniting equal parts terror and something darker, hungrier.

Cassandra met me at the door without surprise. “Tonight you will show the room what obedience looks like when it’s given without reservation,” she said, voice calm. “You may refuse at any moment. Use your safe word if it becomes too much.”

I had the word on my tongue like a talisman — Mercy — but as we walked through the lounge, past familiar masked faces and the soft murmur of expectant voices, the talisman felt less necessary than a key I could throw away. I had practiced obedience until my muscles remembered commands before my mind did. I had tasted the strange power of yielding. Tonight was the hour to prove it.

The main chamber was fuller than it had ever been. The semicircle of masks pressed closer, b
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  • Craving Forbidden Pleasures    Chapter 6: Public Proving

    The invitation was clipped to the inside of the envelope with a single black pin: Proving Night — Public. The word thudded against my ribs like a warning bell and a siren at once. Public. The syllable crawled over my skin, igniting equal parts terror and something darker, hungrier.Cassandra met me at the door without surprise. “Tonight you will show the room what obedience looks like when it’s given without reservation,” she said, voice calm. “You may refuse at any moment. Use your safe word if it becomes too much.”I had the word on my tongue like a talisman — Mercy — but as we walked through the lounge, past familiar masked faces and the soft murmur of expectant voices, the talisman felt less necessary than a key I could throw away. I had practiced obedience until my muscles remembered commands before my mind did. I had tasted the strange power of yielding. Tonight was the hour to prove it.The main chamber was fuller than it had ever been. The semicircle of masks pressed closer, b

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