The jump back of the story from past to present to past is kind of confusing at times... But so far is enjoyable...
2021-11-12 12:45:08
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alexandre Gauthier
Hilarious, fun Victoria makes me laugh ... continue job well done I am glad Sheryl is out do not let her come near him please develop the story between Tyler ,Althea and her cutie Kai
2021-08-06 04:25:16
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Aria
Love the story but can the author reveal atleast few of the suspense in the story. Just a suggestion it would be great if the pace would be a bit faster. waiting for the update. your loyal reader
2021-06-22 23:19:15
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H. WARD
I get so excited for updates😍 I'm loving this story!
2021-05-30 12:45:15
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H. WARD
it's a cute story, only the jumping around time frame can get a little confusing. I think a note at the top of each chapter that mentions *present* or *flashback ___ years* would be beneficial for the reader. Other than that. I really like the story and am looking forward to updates:)
2021-05-13 07:07:07
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If Veen
The best part of your story is Characterization and language❤. The plot twist is amazing, For a moment a/f 1st chapter I thought she will find another nicest man, but you changed the entire scenario. So unimaginable twist. I hated Tyler in 1st chapter, but now chapters later I kind of love him.
2021-04-01 02:44:03
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ahnkitomi
but the prose/energy do have a certain charm, vim and vigor. if you can let scumbag male actions slide so long as he performs some vague remorse later in the story and dont mind weird grammar, there's cute zany side characters. Just make sure you have a high tolerance for ML BS
2026-07-25 10:57:16
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Alin Sha
This book takes forever to update... Regret reading it haiishh...
2021-12-11 13:49:33
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ahnkitomi
can't recommend. the male lead is a vicious, sleazy, self absorbed dude who in any other book would be the horrible boyfriend of a side character soon to be dumped. but you can tell the author only cares about him because the alleged protag just sits around being passively available to him