The jump back of the story from past to present to past is kind of confusing at times... But so far is enjoyable...
2021-11-12 12:45:08
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alexandre Gauthier
Hilarious, fun Victoria makes me laugh ... continue job well done I am glad Sheryl is out do not let her come near him please develop the story between Tyler ,Althea and her cutie Kai
2021-08-06 04:25:16
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Aria
Love the story but can the author reveal atleast few of the suspense in the story. Just a suggestion it would be great if the pace would be a bit faster. waiting for the update. your loyal reader
2021-06-22 23:19:15
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H. WARD
I get so excited for updates😍 I'm loving this story!
2021-05-30 12:45:15
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H. WARD
it's a cute story, only the jumping around time frame can get a little confusing. I think a note at the top of each chapter that mentions *present* or *flashback ___ years* would be beneficial for the reader. Other than that. I really like the story and am looking forward to updates:)
2021-05-13 07:07:07
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If Veen
The best part of your story is Characterization and language❤. The plot twist is amazing, For a moment a/f 1st chapter I thought she will find another nicest man, but you changed the entire scenario. So unimaginable twist. I hated Tyler in 1st chapter, but now chapters later I kind of love him.
2021-04-01 02:44:03
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Alin Sha
This book takes forever to update... Regret reading it haiishh...