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Maxwell's POV
"We are here." He announced, unfastening his seat belt.
She looked around warily. "I hope your new girlfriend wouldn't mind me being here."
He paused, glancing at her, trying to decipher her words. "What new girlfriend?, I'm single, as far as I know." He muttered slowly.
"Didn't mean to judge, but I've heard stories and I'm just trying to be careful."
Eyes narrowed, he tilted his head, didn't smile or frown, but waited a beat before speaking. "No, you're good."
The house was a small brown bungalow, the once pretty roses on the front porch now stood dying away in their pots. The roofs looked a little dated, like the other town houses that surrounded it, but the window and doors had been remodeled.
As soon as the door opened, a large hairy beast attacked Professor Caines' legs barking. The dog perked up at the scent of another person, she smiled softly at the black hairy Newfoundland, that was now going round her feet sniffling, then he stopped suddenly and wagged its tail, mouth open.
That seemed to be a tell, as Professor Caines started to call for after it, closing the door behind them. He pulled off his shoes and slid on a pair of crocs, the dog didn't listen. She watched and repeated his actions.
The house was clean, as far as she could see. It had brown wood floors through out, giving it a nice homey earthy feel.
The front door opened to a large living area joined to the kitchen in a nice modern open concept. The walls were white, with brown and grey furniture to go with the floors.
The living room had only two large grey sofas and a huge TV over a small fire place. There was a small brown coffee table sitting on a grey center rug stacked with papers and huge binders. Then there was a large backless shelf, that seemed to go on up forever, filled with a lot of books and awards.
The kitchen had a black functional granite top island with two stools on the other side serving as a dinning area/ cooking work space.
The cupboards and cabinets matched the floors, the appliances were new, but what stood out most was the huge fridge, she was sure she saw in a commercial a few weeks ago, standing arrogantly in the kitchen.
The home was nice, and exactly what she had expected since she entered his car earlier to the station. His signature fruity smell lingered in the air, mixed with something that smelled like a fabric softener and detergent.
The dog stuck out its tongue, jumping excitedly for some reason.
"Sit, Bear, sit." The dog completely ignored him. "Bear, don't you do it!, Bear." This time he received a loud bark in return. Her face broke into a big smile.
"She's hurt Bear, she can't play right now." He shook his head at the dog, and lowered himself to lead it away to the kitchen.
"She wants me to play with her?." She asked.
"He." He replied quickly, still trying to get Bear's attention, snapping his fingers a few times, he mumbled a few words. But with another bark at its owner, he ran into her, almost knocking her over with his sudden weight.
"Oh, and he's a hugger." She squealed in delight, as the dog stood on his hind legs stretching out its paws to her, she took it laughing. She saw Professor Caines eyes snap to her at the sound, but she ignored him.
"Bear, sit down now!." Professor Caines ordered and tried to pull him away from her. But Bear barked again and tried to bite him.
He let out a fake gasp. "Really?!, that's how it is?!...you betray me at the sight of a pretty girl?." He asked the dog and walked away into the kitchen.
She blinked at his words. Pretty?
"He doesn't get a lot of visitors, but he's naturally too hyper." Professor Caines said in an apologetic voice. She nodded.
She leaned down which wasn't very far, considering that the dog was very big, very much like his owner, although she was tall, he was a taller and larger person of course. She stared at the panting dog with his tongue out and a little bit of drowl and smiled.
"He just wants a belly rub." She said aloud, kneeling before it. Bear quickly rolled over, legs in the air. She looked up to Professor Caines with an 'I told you so look.', rubbing Bear on his belly.
"He never lets me touch him, Traitor!." Maxwell called out to receive a loud bark as his reply.
"After all I've done for you?, guess who's not getting any treats?!." He stuck out his tongue at the dog tauntingly. Breanna laughed hard, till her side hurt.
She had never seen the silly side of her Professor before, she only knew the always angry, grouchy professor, that for some reason, women in the university seemed to dig.
"And I'm locking you out of my room tonight!."
"Oh grow up!...you wouldn't do that to this precious thing." She chuckled.
"He betrayed me first." He scoffed. "And precious is certainly not the way i'd describe him."
He reached for a cabinet and pulled out first aid kit to help her with her side, not before he gave the dog a squeaky toy to keep occupied.
"I'll need you to take your top off." He instructed, leading them to the sofa. She did as he said. He had already seen her in a thong, there was not much to hide anymore.
Wincing as she raised her hands over her head.
"Careful."
He unwrapped the soiled bandage around the large gnash on her side and tossed it. She watched him examine the long stretch of stitches, already bleeding out that ran along her torso.
"Are you a part time doctor or something?." She asked watching him clean her wound carefully, his every action intentional and detailed. He knew what he was doing.
"No, but I've injured a lot of people in my life." He answered her.
"What?, you fight a lot in your free time?." She let out a small snort, suddenly feeling chatty. He didn't answer right away, his eyebrows pinched in concentration.
"Try, for a living?." He pressed on a stitch and she cried out. "Sorry." He mouthed.
"For a living?." She repeated, slowly. "As in you fight for a living?......" She paused, waiting for him to say anything to contradict.
"Last I remembered, you are psychology professor. " She asked looking down at his large hands carefully cleaning her open flesh and as he wrapped her back up.
"I used to be a professional boxer." He motioned to the wall of awards with his head.
"Boxer?." She fixed her gaze on the wall.
"Yeah, um, so, I'm not much of a cook, can you do with avocado toast?." He answered dismissively, standing up, hands on his hip.
She thought about it for a while and sighed. "I don't want to eat right now." Her brother just died, she was in no mood to eat, she just wanted to crawl into a ball and die.
Her heart felt like it would burst open from her chest, her head felt like it would split open, her legs felt like it would give way. She was not okay, and the least of her problems right now was food.
"You have to, cos you need painkillers after."
She tried to put the shirt back on and he frowned. "You need new clean clothes." He commented, eyes still on her. "I think I can find you a shirt and a pair of shorts you won't drown in."
"No, its fine, I can go home, you've done enough." She rushed out to stop him, waving slowly.
"You can spend the night, I'm not going to send a kid out at night, and, I think a storm is coming, so its not up for discussion." He shook his head and disappeared down the hall but before he came back with the clothes, she had fallen asleep on the couch.
Hola! amigos! (Yeah i'm definitely not Spanish) Thoughts?. What did we all think about the rewritten Professor's POV?. I thought it was a little unfair that Breanna didn't get a first person POV and he did in the previous version. So now every thing remains in my narrative (third person). I'm sure you have noticed the title change by now.......what do we think?, i had a few options; "When they fell" "The art of falling" "The act of falling" My editor says this was best, so if you really don't like it, its really her fault ha ha.........( If you're seeing this, kidding! ). Now we await the book cover and you guys are in for a retreat! Like, share, and leave a review!. Love, Bee.
*Edited Breanna's POV "Breanna." She heard a voice call out, but she couldn't respond, his voice sounded very distant to her, like he was calling her from more than a mile away. Her whole body was on fire, from inside out, she wanted to run, shout, scream, she wanted cold water. But for some reason, she didn't have control over her own self. Her hands and legs felt heavy - too heavy to move, then he called her name again, this time it echoed, turning to pleas and cries from a thousand voices. It was too much, she continued to shake her head, crying, trying to shout 'stop' but her mouth refused to make any sound. "Breanna….." "Breanna?!." She felt a soft touch on her shoulder, like a light caress, but as soon as he did, and like strong lightning, strength came to her. Like he released what held her down, she shot up from the bed with a start and started screaming in a shrill voice that was loud enough to wake the neighbors, kicking and punching every which way. She was having a
*Edited Maxwell's POV A week later The day was hot and bright, not the best combo in Lakeside. After the crazy week with Breanna, he couldn't deny it, all he had thought about after she left on Sunday morning was how crazy the entire thing was. He felt awful and angry, that she was hurting and it may or may not be his fault. He had not been able to get her screams out of his mind, how she called out to her brother that night, how she kicked and shouted for him to wake up, he couldn't get the glare on her face to that officer that questioned her, out of him mind. He had not expected her to be in school the next Monday, like at all, he didn't want to seem impulsive or suspicious, he would have asked her to stay one more night in his house. He didn't know what was going on in her mind, what she was thinking, if she had another nightmare, but he was sure of one thing, she was choosing to ignore it, her being here only proved it. Immediately he saw her strut in for class, he desperate
*Edited Maxwell's POV "Tell me about him." He suggested, quietly as if giving her a choice to. She side glanced him and sniffed. "The apartment feels empty without him, everything is haunting me, the couch where he'd pass nights on his school projects and thesis, his to-do lists on the fridge." She paused. "He had music sheets everywhere, so that any time he got inspiration no matter where he was in the house, he'd write it down." She swallowed and chortled. "But Jack was a terrible musician, every one knew it, except himself, some times i got mad, that he was wasting money on studio time when he could be helping me, you know, so I didn't tell him how proud of him I was often, that he was chasing his dreams with every bone in his body, because I was mad, I was so mad that I had to start stripping while he got to gallivant his life away." Her laugh turned to sobs again. He found a box of tissue and handed it to her as she cried. "I was selfish, I wanted him to give up his dreams,
*Edited Breanna's POV Just like the night before, and every day since it happened, she sat down in the living room, perfectly still as she stared into nothingness. The day had been extremely hard, from pretending to be alright, to a new five thousand word thesis she had to write, her car breaking down, the constant pain in her side, her landlady screaming insults at her and coming home to an empty apartment. It had not been the best. She had thought that by now, her eyes would be dry, that there would be no more tears. But her eyes proved her wrong, every time she came home, to his house, the house they had shared since she moved in with him. She cried. His presence lingered every where, it was his house after all, she had never cried so much in her entire life, but for course, she had never lost a brother before in her entire life. She wasn't sure if she wanted to continue with life, If she wanted to be in school, she couldn’t afford it anyway, she couldn't handle being constant
*Edited This chapter has brief mention of strong language ********************** Maxwell's POV A week later. He didn't plan on going, but he had to. Steve and the rest of the guys went too, they had to stay far away, but they were there, honoring the lives of those who passed on that awful night. He didn't like to think about it much, but when he saw her in the black dress, holding a bunch of white roses, the blank distant look in her eyes as the service commenced it rushed to him like ligthning. He knew she was not okay and for some reason, no matter how he tried to shake the feeling that he could help. That he should help. He just couldn't. He was never like this, he was usually glib, but this time, it was some what personal. He began to imagine all the other people that died, how they meant something to their families, but now they were dead, gone to never return. His stomach churned. "Fuck!." He had not felt like this since his grand dad died, he never wanted to relive
*Edited Breanna's POV She took a deep breath through the lungs, as the warm air hit her face, the breeze tugging at the skirt of the black dress she was wearing. The town was holding a mass burial for the people that died that night. So here she was, with a bouquet of white roses in her hands, Jack loved roses, especially the white ones, their mother had a white rose garden when she was alive, where she would spend hours trimming and nursing all weekend according to him. A few of Jack's friends came to support, but she couldn't register any of their faces, his producer and even his boss from work. His girlfriend didn't make it, she didn't even bother to ask why. She didn't tell her dad, he wasn't even in the right frame of mind to understand anyway, it was useless telling him. It would only cost her more money to bring him all the way here. The service ended as quickly as it started, she didn't hear a word the priest said, she felt like life had left her and that she was just dri
*Edited This chapter contains strong language and reference through out. ******************** Maxwell's POV Petra called him at eleven pm, and couldn't stop talking about Wilson. "Max!, you didn't remember to tell me she was gorgeous!." She sang over the back ground chaos of her husband yelling at their kids not to kill each other. He sighed, dragging a hand over his face. He had a long stress filled day, that wasn't over yet. With a lot of work on his table, he didn't need her prying self. The night was especially hot and it was killing his work progress. A mail arrived earlier and he was informed that his deadline was shifted up. So since he got home, he buried himself under piles and piles of papers work, locking himself away in his office. The moonlight peeked in from the large sliding doors that led to the patio, casting a shadow over the large book shelf. He could hear the distant hoot of the owls on the trees, and the crickets in the mud, the sweet soothing sound of natu
*Edited Breanna's POV Two weeks later Dr. Robinson invited her to the grand opening. Thus her current rummage through her closet to find a decent enough dress for a grand opening and cocktail after party in the awful state of her room. Although she had only been working a week, easing into the work atmosphere was definitely easy. Besides, the clinic was yet to be properly opened so all she did was organize her boss's emails and report the last details of work needed to be done to the place. The only issue was her sleeping routine. For a whole year she used to stay up all night working. Unlike now, she was awake both at night, due to her nightmares and all day attendng classes or at work. So she was tired a lot. Settling for her old high school gold prom dress, she got ready. Shoes weren't an issue, although cheap and thrifted - she had a number of them from stripping. The dress was tight, extremely, it had been almost three years since she wore it. She wanted to sell it when s