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EDIT UPDATE 2.0

Author: Breakthrough
last update Last Updated: 2022-10-31 20:05:48

Hey, hey! Happy halloween!. 

So as usual, there isn't a specific reason for this update, but i just think its due. 

If you're new, welcome.... this book is being edited. Live. 

That means, there are edited chapters and some arent. It wouldn't be so much trouble if the editing is just grammer........but when i say edit, i mean the story line is being edited too. 

As of when i'm writing this, forty-seven chapters have been edited. But the rest that follow aren't. 

For new readers, that can be confusing. 

How do you know which chapter are edited, you may ask?. So you'll know which chapter to read first......

Every edited chapter is numbered. So if you see a number in the chapter title, its edited and you can read. 

All edited chapters have an *Edited tag at the very top and some times a trigger warning, so once you see it, you know its edited. 

Edited chapters are all written in third person narrative with respect to prespective...........that means, in my narrative (past partcicple)  but in the character's POV........

I also announce which chapters are edited and live in the reviews section on the book. But with the reccent glitches on the website, (i'm sure a number of you also noticed them........) a few weeks ago, some chapters take longer to reflect even after i've edited them for days, so the reviews announcement  is not always up to date.....

At the end of each chapter is also an author note that explains more details of how much changes occured in the edited chapters.  

Wow, that was a mouthfull. 

This problem, anyway will be just for a while longer. I mentioned in one of my previous that i want to get rid of the chapters in the previous version still in a timeline that the edited version has passed. 

If you've been religiously following all the edits, you'll know that the edited versions are quicker. Chapter 47. PLAYERS AND TITIES! is in the same timeline/ correlates with what happens in Chapter-i-can't-remember-the-number. DEAD!............

So we've successfull sped up the story and jumped almost a hundred chapters of gibberish........now it's not necessary for those almsot a hundred chapters to remain. They only make the book bogus and need to be cut. 

Did that make sense? 

So, i'll run that by my editor and discuss when i can delete them, i'm saying this here, so you all don't get scared when you suddenly see less than 143 chapters in the book preview.......... 

There is no socery or dark magic, i've only just deleted the chapters still in previous version of the book. 

I hope you understand and this does not confuse you further.

Please, i don't think i've said this since i started editing, but the OGs know that i'm very much open to suggestions and corrections, you can't possibly be more or say anything more ruthless than countless publishing agencies and editors i've had to work with. 

If you see an error, a repetiton, misspelling, cultural bias......please call me out, i've never left my country before so my knowledge on certain things are very limited to G*oogle and movies. But please be nice. It literally won't kill to be. 

If you are still confused about the edits and anything concerning the book, please ask away in the comments. 

Happy Halloween and to those that celebrate Day of the Dead!. 

Love, 

Bee. 

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