wish there was more of the story i hope there be a book 2 of this story
2024-01-16 10:37:55
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Blentkills
So engaging! Really great story! The minor mistakes didn't bug me at all, as the read is fun and interesting! Deserves more reads!!!
2021-12-11 22:11:14
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Ronan
This is amazing, I like the plot and how the story progress but I think it needs a little bit of editing to make it more engaging and appealing to us readers that rarely reads fantasy.
2021-12-10 19:17:04
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michael chukwu
Okkk. Just got invited,, and started reading, and what i can say is... Im enjoying the story. Lets see how it all goes!
2021-11-01 17:33:45
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Sway
The start of the book is really good, but sometimes hard to read because of language and ponctuation. The story is attractive enough to close your eyes on some mistakes and enjoy it. Over all, it's a very interesting start and I am wondering where this will go. Congrats!
2021-12-13 05:29:25
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Cray
I like the story and the dynamics involved
2021-10-28 17:06:13
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loveforever
Maybe I am too cautious about reading, but I myself found a big disadvantage that prevents you from transmitting the content better. It was the punctuation. The way you put them make me hard to read your fantastic story. I really hope to see your chapters get edited shortly, because it deserves it.
2021-12-10 09:38:31
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Katie Grayson
Are we getting the rest of the book or is it not being updated anymore