I'm going to miss Eli and Josh, ...
the end of September is near, the days go by so fast ...............
2026-09-08 23:44:06
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Joseph Maycott Tabañag Lim
please continue the love story of Josh and Eli. ......️......️
2026-09-03 11:31:07
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Joseph Maycott Tabañag Lim
I love josh and Eli ...️...️...️
2026-08-27 20:36:12
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Anaya Santos
If we can move towards the juicy stuff more on Eli, Josh and her boyfriend and Natalie dynamic that would be interesting to read
2026-08-26 22:42:43
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Anaya Santos
Hi author can we shift the tone a bit, I feel like it’s getting repetitive I don’t think it’s necessary to keep bringing up about David, Natalie and Eli relationship and how it’s weird every chapter. It feels like I’m reading the same thing over and over again just worded differently.
2026-08-26 22:42:10
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Callmesasha
I’m also a writer here, please check my books, “In love with spiritual father, my Billionaire husband was never human and Mummy i didnt Rum away: The Abandoned Child
2026-08-25 03:17:12
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Joseph Maycott Tabañag Lim
hello author, I'm here for Eli and Josh, any update? thank you.
2026-08-21 21:42:35
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Nia
Too long need to wrap up
2026-08-21 09:30:32
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Miriam Rocio
The story is really good but I’m still in chapter 410. So not sure how much will happen in the next 600(and counting) chapters.
I hope it’s not prolonged too much unnecessarily. I felt a bit cringe with the plot holes like the change in the name of Chase’s dad, or Daven saying Josh was 5 🥲
2026-08-14 04:19:55
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leeshaleen2
Very good book to read, word choices used was good to describe the characters feelings