Hi, have you ever thought about expanding your work to other platforms?
2022-12-30 15:17:08
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euphorialiterature
what a sweet story!
2022-03-01 13:09:12
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Jayne Lanham
Love it!! Continue to write!...️
2021-12-31 00:25:26
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Lalitha
Short and sweet story
2021-07-13 12:54:59
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Catherine Ponsaran
nice read ☺️ keep writing...maybe a sequel on this one ❤️
2021-06-01 01:52:44
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Simran Kaur
fabulus book.
loved it.
2021-05-28 21:51:54
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Susan Marie Tan-Flores
I really enjoyed reading this book. Thank you author for the job well done. 💕
2021-05-12 06:34:41
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Surf1625
Definitely keep writing. Your pacing was good. You didn't drag out particular plot lines. Overall, I really enjoyed your story. Please focus on the editing. It will improve your overall story telling. Good luck with a sequel.
2021-05-06 15:05:30
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Surf1625
I have to say this was an interesting & fun story. Loved u made the characters smart, funny, fun and not act in absurd & idiotic, nonsensical ways. That was much appreciated. My biggest issue was the mangling of the grammar, tenses and word choice. Found myself auticorrecting the dialogue. Must fix.