His Rejected Luna Ulasan

Very easy read

Why does the chapters repeat all ove

Good read so far . Needs to be proofread as you were writing. Some grammatical errors and to many repeats of same chapter.

Why were we in the middle of one story and then it switched to something completely different?

DONT PURCHASE THIS BOOK! Chapters repeat, sooooo many errors that haven’t been re-edited and the story abruptly changes around chapter 49 and becomes a completely different story. It’s so all over the place, don’t do it!

There are a bunch of grammar and spelling errors, there are parts that are misplaced, and at chapter 49 you go to a completely different story. Not impressed; so not recommend purchasing unless you only want half a story