SarahBlythe, I really am enjoying your story. You do have a gift (flair) for words . One thing though, I will tell you that you or whomever is proofreading your story needs to do better as there are pronoun errors which can and does throw the reader off a little. Otherwise great book ! !
2026-07-10 04:05:10
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Katie Tutor
SarahBlythe, I love this story and your writing style. However, there are too many grammatical errors with the wrong pronouns or confusing sentences. You need to do a better job of proofreading before you post your chapters. I believe that you need to reread you chapters and correct errors
2026-07-08 20:50:23
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Kimberley
Love this book and the characters! Great story!
2026-07-08 02:59:39
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Lauren Petersen
I'm just glad Rico and Calla finally got their happy ending
2026-06-24 18:16:36
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dimple
it was a great read
2026-06-22 18:21:56
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tindo
One of best I have read so far
2026-06-21 12:46:46
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Oluwa Nifemi
This is really one of the best story have ever read on Goodnovel.... Kudos to you Authoress ...️
2026-06-20 15:40:24
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Minette Schreier
Great story.
2026-06-20 14:39:37
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Firefly
Great story!! Hopefully there is more in this universe in the future!