The author is obviously not a native-English speaker. The pronouns are messed up and characters are referred to in both the first and third persons. If you want people to pay money for your book, you need to pay a proofreader. Skip this one.
2025-04-17 08:09:20
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Ruth Andersen
Are there two Veronica in chapter 70? confusing.
2025-02-27 22:21:27
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Mweemba Kaambwa
This is an interesting story.
It can make a very good tv show....
Storyline is on point.
2023-11-17 23:16:50
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Delinda Schumacher
so has this Author completed any of the books?
2023-10-20 01:52:28
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Mweemba Kaambwa
A male (man) preposition is "he... his"
I'm finding it difficulty understanding what sex Randy and Kennedy are because the author keeps referring to them as "she...her...hers"