รีวิว Italian Mafia

Story interesting but confusing to follow often changing things around. Enjoyed characters developing but difficult to understand!

Love it so far

can't find the second book

"Italian Mafia 2/ she's still mine", now available here at Goodnovel

When will the second book be released???

Its sad the writer did the epologue in a rush...Can there be stories of them later in years?? Would love to read about Lorenzo searching for them and Fio and her son's life... But thank you for this amazing story

It's a great, interesting story. Love the way hoe the writer brings it. Can't wait for more chapters.

I only read a few chapters but I couldn't continue. I understand that English may not be the authors first language but I shouldn't have to work to read the book. There were too many times where the writing went from a characters POV to the authors POV mid sentence. Too many mix ups w/she he him her

The story itself is very interesting, but the grammar makes it hard to follow. As it constantly changes between he/she and his/hers when in one of the characters pov.

Poor editing