Lauryn: The Shunned Beta 리뷰

Dude you should write more

Best story ever, i’ll always support you

luv dis masterpiece

good pace story but confusing

Continuez à faire du bon travail

In this story you really surprised me, it's a fast pacing story that seems to be written by an experienced author. Your narration is not long here but you make it look like a mixture of Laura Dave and Barbara T. Bradford...️ I really liked it. simple, concise and past pacing......

It's not the best, but it has a prologue that's quick enough to understand. Keep working, God bless you.

Slightly better than the previous one.