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Enemies within

Author: Dorothea josh
last update publish date: 2026-04-30 05:36:02

The creature vanished.

Just like that.

One second it was there… reaching… about to tear into her—

The next—

Nothing.

Gone.

Lena’s breath hitched in her throat.

Her body still wouldn’t move.

Her fingers were locked.

Her chest refused to rise.

“…w-what…” she whispered, her voice barely there.

Noah’s grip on her arm tightened painfully.

“Lena… Lena, get up…” his voice shook, but he didn’t let go.

She couldn’t answer.

Because she saw him.

Standing right in front of her.

Zane Korr.

Dark clothing.

Still.

Silent.

Like he had always been there… even when he hadn’t.

His face gave nothing away.

No emotion.

No effort.

Just cold… empty control.

His hand was still slightly raised.

Like whatever he had done—

it had been nothing to him.

Noah swallowed hard.

“Did… did you see that…?” he whispered, barely breathing.

Lena didn’t answer.

Her eyes stayed locked on Zane.

Because something about him felt wrong.

Not like the creatures.

Worse.

Quieter.

Like death didn’t chase him—

it followed him.

Zane’s gaze shifted.

Slowly.

It landed on Lena.

And for a second—

her chest tightened so hard she thought it would cave in.

He didn’t smile.

Didn’t speak.

Didn’t even blink.

He just looked at her.

Then—

he turned.

And walked away.

No sound.

No hesitation.

Just gone.

Like he had never been there.

“…what… was that…” Tess’s voice trembled from beside them.

Lena blinked slowly.

Her body finally reacted.

Air rushed into her lungs all at once.

Too fast.

Too sharp.

She gasped.

“Ah—!”

Noah pulled her up quickly.

“Come on… come on… we can’t stay here…”

“I—” her legs almost gave out again.

But this time—

she forced them to hold.

“I’m up… I’m up…”

Her voice shook.

Her hands shook.

Everything shook.

But she was standing.

“That guy…” Noah whispered, glancing in the direction Zane had gone. “He didn’t even try…”

Lena swallowed hard.

“…he didn’t need to.”

That was the worst part.

The way he moved—

like this place wasn’t a threat.

Like the creatures weren’t even worth reacting to.

Tess clung tighter to Lena’s arm.

“I don’t like him…” she whispered.

Lena didn’t respond.

Because she didn’t either.

But she couldn’t explain why.

A loud crack split the ground again.

Closer.

Too close.

“Move!” Noah snapped, pulling them both.

They ran again.

Faster this time.

Not just from the creatures—

but from everything.

From everyone.

Because something had changed.

Lena could feel it.

The panic around them wasn’t the same anymore.

It wasn’t just fear.

It was something else.

Something sharper.

Suspicion.

Eyes.

Watching.

Not just the ground.

Not just the shadows.

Each other.

A man shoved past them roughly.

“Out of my way!”

Lena stumbled slightly.

Noah steadied her.

“Careful!”

“I’m okay…”

But her voice wasn’t steady.

Because she saw it.

The way the man didn’t even look back.

Didn’t care if he pushed someone into danger.

Didn’t care if they fell.

Didn’t care if they died.

“…they don’t care anymore…” she whispered.

Noah didn’t argue.

Because he saw it too.

Another figure stepped forward ahead.

Kai Storm.

He stood out immediately.

Broad shoulders.

Muscular build.

Confidence in every movement.

But it wasn’t just that.

It was the way he smiled.

In the middle of all this.

While people screamed.

While the ground cracked.

While creatures hunted.

He smiled.

“…this is insane…” Noah whispered.

Kai rolled his shoulders slightly.

A creature burst from the ground near him—

fast—

violent—

deadly—

He didn’t run.

Didn’t flinch.

He stepped into it.

“Come on!” Kai shouted, almost laughing.

He swung—

hard—

reckless—

The creature vanished instantly.

Erased.

Just like that.

Kai let out a sharp breath.

“…that’s it?” he said, almost disappointed.

Lena froze for a second.

“…he’s enjoying it…” she whispered.

Noah stared.

“No… no, that’s not normal…”

Kai turned slightly.

His eyes swept over the others.

Over Lena.

Over Noah.

Over Tess.

Sharp.

Alive.

Excited.

“If you’re going to survive…” he called out, voice loud over the chaos, “stop running like prey!”

Someone shouted back, “Easy for you to say!”

Kai grinned.

“Then die tired.”

Lena’s chest tightened.

That smile—

It wasn’t relief.

It wasn’t survival.

It was something darker.

Something that didn’t belong here.

Or maybe—

it belonged too well.

“Stay away from him…” Noah muttered under his breath.

Lena nodded slightly.

“I wasn’t planning to get close…”

But her eyes lingered for a second longer.

Because strength like that—

it pulled attention.

Even when it scared her.

A scream cut through the air again.

Another player—

gone.

Erased.

Just like that.

No warning.

No chance.

Lena’s stomach twisted violently.

“Don’t look…” Noah said quickly.

But she already had.

And she couldn’t unsee it.

A voice spoke quietly nearby.

“Running blindly won’t save you.”

Lena turned.

Mira Quinn.

Slim.

Still.

Her sharp eyes moved across the chaos like she was studying it.

Not afraid.

Not panicked.

Thinking.

Always thinking.

“What do you mean?” Noah asked, his voice tense.

Mira didn’t look at him immediately.

She watched the ground.

The cracks.

The patterns.

Then—

she spoke.

“They’re not random.”

Lena frowned.

“What?”

Mira pointed slightly.

“Watch the ground. The cracks… they follow movement. Panic makes it worse.”

Noah blinked.

“You’re saying… we’re triggering them?”

Mira’s lips pressed into a thin line.

“Partly.”

Tess shook her head quickly.

“No… no, that’s not possible…”

Mira finally looked at her.

Cold.

Measured.

“Do you want comfort… or do you want to live?”

Tess went quiet instantly.

Her grip on Lena tightened.

“I… I want to live…”

“Then stop reacting like prey,” Mira said simply.

Lena swallowed.

Her heart still raced.

But something in her mind—

shifted.

Slightly.

“Wait…” she said, her voice uneven. “So if we move slower…”

“More controlled,” Mira corrected.

“…we might not trigger them as much?”

Mira gave a small nod.

“Better odds.”

Noah let out a shaky breath.

“That’s still not safe…”

“No,” Mira agreed. “It’s not.”

She turned away again.

Already focused elsewhere.

Already calculating.

Like the rest of them didn’t matter.

“…she’s scary too…” Tess whispered.

Lena nodded faintly.

“Yeah…”

Because Mira wasn’t like Kai.

She wasn’t loud.

Wasn’t reckless.

But she was dangerous in a different way.

Quiet.

Smart.

Watching everything.

Even them.

A sudden movement—

close—

too close—

Lena turned sharply.

Nothing.

Her breath hitched.

“Did you see that?” she whispered.

Noah shook his head.

“No… what—”

Another player screamed.

Then—

cut off.

Silence.

Lena’s stomach dropped.

“…someone’s gone…” Tess whispered.

“But… there was no creature…” Noah said slowly.

Lena’s chest tightened.

Because he was right.

There had been no crack.

No warning.

No sound.

Just—

gone.

Her eyes scanned the space.

Searching.

Then—

she saw him again.

Zane.

Further away now.

Walking.

Calm.

Unbothered.

And near him—

an empty space.

Where someone had just been.

“…no…” Lena whispered.

Her pulse spiked.

“That’s not…”

Noah followed her gaze.

His face went pale.

“…he didn’t even touch them…”

Lena’s fingers curled slightly.

Tight.

Cold.

Because now she understood.

The creatures weren’t the only threat.

The ground wasn’t the only danger.

Players—

players were part of this too.

And some of them—

weren’t trying to survive.

They were choosing who didn’t.

A low hum filled the air suddenly.

Sharp.

Cutting through everything.

Everyone froze.

The ground stopped moving.

The cracks slowed.

Then—

a screen flickered into existence above them.

Cold.

White.

Unforgiving.

Text appeared.

PLAYERS REMAINING: 37

A heavy silence dropped.

Someone whispered—

“…there were more than that…”

Lena’s chest tightened.

Her heart pounded.

Too many gone.

Too fast.

More text appeared.

ADAPT OR BE ERASED

Kai laughed softly.

“Now that’s honest.”

Mira didn’t react.

Zane didn’t even look.

Noah’s grip on Lena tightened again.

“…we’re not all the same here…” he whispered.

Lena nodded slowly.

Her eyes moving—

from Kai—

to Mira—

to Zane—

to the others.

Her chest felt tight.

Heavy.

Because the truth settled in.

Hard.

Painful.

Terrifying.

“This isn’t just about surviving the game…” she said quietly.

Noah looked at her.

“…yeah…”

Her voice dropped.

Almost a whisper.

“…it’s about surviving them too…”

A faint sound echoed behind her.

Soft.

Close.

Too close.

Lena’s breath caught.

Slowly—

she turned.

Nothing.

But the feeling stayed.

That presence.

Watching.

Choosing.

Her heart slammed harder.

Faster.

And this time—

it wasn’t just fear of dying.

It was fear of who would decide when she did.

Lena notices how people shrink around him.

How fear follows him.

Noah whispers,

“I don’t trust him…”

Lena doesn’t respond.

But she doesn’t trust him either.

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