Nice work Author, I love the cliffhangers on each of the chapters, makes me wanna read more. keep it up...
2023-10-16 06:41:53
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Angi Splawn
This story has a great start but since your updates are so slow I'll wait until you finish to get too involved. I've been left hanging too much lately..
2023-10-15 00:45:08
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Dawn Cochran
68 chapters 10/6/2023
2023-10-07 00:48:06
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Delinda Schumacher
67 chapters 9-27-23
2023-09-29 00:18:35
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Zara Khan
good story
2023-08-16 20:13:58
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Zara Khan
good start looking forward for more
2023-08-16 20:13:23
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Dawn Cochran
So I can't get past chapter 22. The author had a great story but failed with the execution of the book. It's all over the place and doesn't make sense and feels rushed and not thought out. I give her points for this, but the book needs a complete overhaul.