Very amateur dialogue! Hope it gets better
Also so far bo description of the FL!!
2024-10-24 16:46:55
2
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TAMIKA STACKHOUSE
I'm looking forward to this story I hope it isn't one of those where she chooses one mate and not both
2024-10-18 14:24:57
3
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Shannon Featherstone
I like it but I hope she rejects jade he's an asshole
2024-10-18 06:47:36
4
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Carolyn Pinder
great story
2024-10-16 05:20:44
1
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betina penyondol
So far ok!
The storyline is interesting. But I don't feel like reading it to the end.
2024-11-27 20:30:57
0
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Tonya Stutts
I am giving a 4 as I have not been reading it long but it’s an easy storyline to follow not jumping all round and the storyline has been good so far. Look forward to to reading the rest
2024-10-07 05:24:27
2
0
Carmin
The story line is descent. Not understanding the reason for the ‘unknown’ character and the grammar is horrible.